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Naruto first chapter

Tue Jun 17, 2008, 8:51 PM
There was a knock at the door. Saki was upstairs in her room training. Her mother was in the kitchen washing dishes.

“Huh? Who could be coming to visit this early?” She dried her hands on a towel and went to answer the door.

“Oh! Lord kazekage what brings you here so early?”

“Yes, May I come in…it’s about your clan the sand village is becoming to have to many people and we don’t have many ninja that can survive this war most of them are not strong enough…Your clan is the strongest and you have the strongest daughter of the clan, so she is expected very much…her and her brother. It won’t be to long till the two Akatsuki members come and a war starts which means you’ll have to leave soon.. I’m sorry but we have no choice. The latest your clan can leave is tonight and if you leave any later your Daughter will die and your clan will be destroyed. I’m sorry.” It hurt for her mother to hear those words but she had no choice she had to leave in order for her family to leave. “You can take your journey to the leaf village, they already have a spot for your clan can live.” With that lord Kazekage left the woman’s home as her family pack their bags and left their beloved village as Saki walked with her mother leading her daughter into a dangerous world.


“Welcome to Konohagakure. You will be living east of the village these people will show to where you will live and the Children can go around with the genin.” The 5th hokage told the clan.

“Hmph, No thanks, I know this place like back of my hand, since I had so many missions around here” Saki said pulling off her hat revealing a beautiful girl with the legendary eye of the rinnegan and beautiful green hair. It was long and ran down her back. “Mother, I’m going to the ramen shop... Dayeto you coming.”

“Huh? Yeah right behind ya.” The raven-haired boy followed after his twin sister.

The two walked to the ramen shop both their rinnegans glowing as they looked at the ground not wanting to show them off. The two missu’s sat down at inside The ramen shop as they got glare’s from the two sitting down from them. One was wearing and orange and blue Jumpsuit mostly orange with messy blond hair and blue eyes. He had marks on his face that looked like whiskers. Saki knew who this boy was. This boy was Naruto Uzumaki and the boy next To him was Sasuke Uchiha, The only survivor from the Uchiha clan.

“What can I get for you two boys.” The man had said to Saki and her twin brother. She balled her fists.

“I hope you weren’t referring to me as ‘boy’.” She pulled out a needle.

“IT’S SO OBIVIOUS IT’S A GIRL! SHE’S HOT!” The two yelled at the noodle shop owner.

“Who are you anyway? You’re a sand ninja I’m sure but why are you here!?” Sasuke got an angry look in his eyes.

“Easy there, I’m not here to fight I just came here from the sand village yes your right as for why...the sand village is having a war and if my clan were to stay any longer we would be dead right now not to mention I would be taken away by An akatsuki member named...Deidara. So I had no choice... As for my name and who I am it’s polite to give your Name out first.” She glanced a smile as her twin brother pulled out a kunai ‘these guys a leaf ninja... even though our villages are allies they could strike at any time.’ Dayeto thought as he looked at the two through his shaggy black hair.

“Fine then, I’m Sasuke uchiha this is my teammate Naruto Uzumaki. I’m sorry if I sounded rude by asking that question, I’m just not use to it that’s all.” Sasuke replied to her. ‘Him and the blond are cute!’ Saki thought the kunai away. “Dayeto it’s okay were safe.” He nodded.

“The name is Saki and since we know each other so well, why don’t you guys show me around a bit tonight maybe.” Saki said rising one of her emerald eyebrows.

“Oh yeah sure anything. Met us back here a 8:30” Were these two asking Saki out on a date!?


“That might not be possible, since we just go here from the Sand village we need our rest we have no time to play around...I’m sorry but we all need to train. Saki let’s go I think I hear mother talking to Daisui to come find us.” Dayeto didn’t like these guys, especially that one with from the Uchiha clan.

It had finally hit sasuke know, these were the members of the missu clan. Their eyes gave it away. ‘The rinnegan’

“You two are from the missu clan am I right? Your eyes give it away.” The two twins grinned.

“Yes your right but I must be going...Bye Naruto, bye sasuke.” She grinned as she left with her brother going to the clan’s area. People stopped and stared as the walked down the streets and know Saki with those eyes of hers she would knock some people out and laugh as they fell to the ground her brother as usual, would ignore her.

“You know these leaf ninja really have no respect for the Rinnagan, Don’t you think so Saki?” The boy said looking forward.

“Yeah your right makes me wan-“ Dayeto cut her off.

“Don’t saki you already knocked out 6 people and put 2 in total shock we don’t want any trouble, and we start the academy tomorrow so save for when you need to show off when your doing something in front of the class, alright?”

“Fine” Saki Agreed with her brother so much because he could go out of control and kill her. He had almost killed orochimaru and she saw how that went off so no way she was going to push it any farther.
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